My extrovert trait
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From a childhood to now in worklife, I tend to be more outgoing and social when I participate in a group activity.
>>From childhood to my current work life, I find myself being more outgoing and social when engaging in group activities.
It is related to my trait that I want to break ackward mood and make fast performance.
>>This inclination is linked to my desire to break awkward moods and enhance overall group performance.
When I lead the group of people, there are benefits helping people to follow my working speed and to be close relationship beyond task.
>>Leading a group has its advantages, such as helping people align with my working speed and fostering closer relationships beyond the tasks at hand.
However, there are risks that I become more tired than others and first person of blaming.
>>However, it comes with risks, including the potential for increased fatigue compared to others and being the first person to receive blame.
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