my face

2018-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I have a allergic These day my whole body is itched by me even my face and my scale (head skin) especially at night ㅠㅠ It may be congenital I was ashamed you to see my face I have a interest in sign language I have met my husband and then we were married kkk My husband have taught the deaf as director so he is good at sign language I'm proud of my husband I asked manager where my homework hands in I heard It's right here Please check my homework^^ 1. We had fish for dinner. What did we have for dinner? 2. It cost a lot of money. How much does it cost ? 3. He bought a T - shirt. What did he buy? 4. We ate ham and eggs. What did we eat ?

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]! Thanks for being a diligent student. ^^

I really enjoyed the talk with you. Please stay as enthusiastic as always. Below are your corrections. Please check and consider them next time. ^^

See you in class!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I have a allergic

>> I have an allergy.
These day my whole body is itched by me even my face and my scale (head skin) especially at night ㅠㅠ

>>These days my whole body is itching, even my face and my scale (head skin) especially at night ㅠㅠ
It may be congenital.

>>> CORRECT
I was ashamed you to see my face

>>> I was ashamed to show you my face.
I have a interest in sign language.

>>> I am interested in sign language.
I have met my husband and then we were married kkk.

>>> CORRECT
 My husband have taught the deaf as director.

>>> My husband is teaching deaf students. He is a director.
so he is good at sign language

>>> So he is good at sign language.
I\'m proud of my husband.
>>> CORRECT
I asked manager where my homework hands in

>>> I asked the manager where I can upload my homework.
I heard It\'s right here.
Please check my homework^^
>>> CORRECT
1. We had fish for dinner. What did we have for dinner?

>>> What did you have for dinner?
2. It cost a lot of money. How much does it cost ?

>>>How much did it cost ?
3. He bought a T - shirt. What did he buy?

>>> CORRECT
4. We ate ham and eggs. What did we eat ?

>>> What did you eat ? 

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