My family

2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

I feel good. I have 3 uncles. Uncles love me. I don\'t have a brother and a sister. I have 2 grandmother. I don\'t have a grandfather. Because my grandfather died. My family is mom,dad and me. My aunt is good at food.

강사 첨삭

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I feel good.

>> correct~~


 I have 3 uncles.

>> or: I have three uncles.


 Uncles love me.

>> My uncles love me. 


 I don\'t have a brother and a sister.

>> I don\'t have any brothers or sisters.


 I have 2 grandmother.

>> I have two grandmothers. 


 I don\'t have a grandfather.  Because my grandfather died.

>> I don\'t have a grandfather because they both died.


 My family is mom,dad and me.

>> My family consists of my mom, my dad, and myself.


 My aunt is good at food.

>> My aunt is good at making food.

>> My aunt is good at cooking.




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