My family.

2020-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Good evening Gabby! Do you have a nice day on today? I was a very busy today. When finished my class, my friend to met yesterday visited our house with lettuce. So she and me walked the apartment with talk with for 2 hours. My family are my husband and two children, 2 pets. My husband is 63 years old and economic activity. My son is a student to cooks well. MY daughter is lesson Progolf. She is a really activity never stay at home whole day. She has many frienda. So she always is busy. See you tomorrow. Bye...

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Great job! I am happy to learn about your happy family.

- T. Gabby :)

Good evening Gabby!

>> Correct.
Do you have a nice day on today?

>> Did you have a nice day?
I was a very busy today.

>> I was busy today.
When finished my class, my friend to met yesterday visited our house with lettuce.

>> After my class, my friend visited me here at home and she brought lettuce.
So she and me walked the apartment with talk with for 2 hours.

>> So we walked around the apartment and talked for 2 hours.

My family are my husband and two children, 2 pets.

>> My family is composed of my husband, my 2 children and our 2 pets.
My husband is 63 years old and economic activity.

>> My husband is 63 years old and he\'s into economic activity.
My son is a student to cooks well.

>> My son is still a student and he cooks well.
MY daughter is lesson Progolf.

>> My daughter attends progolf lesson.
She is a really activity never stay at home whole day.

>> She really has a lot of activities and seldom stays at home.
She has many friends So she always is busy.
>> She has many friends and she\'s always busy.
See you tomorrow.

>> Correct.
Bye.

>> Correct.

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