My family gatheribg
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a family gathering once a month.
I have lived alone since 2007. And my brother gor merried for fore months.
We are not that easy to see each other.
When we have the gathwmering It quite be differnce from my brother has a son. My family taje care of him and he makes us happly.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas! Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the good work!
-Teacher Joy
I have a family gathering once a month.
>> Correct
I have lived alone since 2007.
>> Correct
And my brother gor merried for fore months.
>> And my brother got married four months ago.
We are not that easy to see each other.
>> It\'s not easy for us to see each other.
When we have the gathwmering It quite be differnce from my brother has a son.
>> When we have a gathering, it\'s quite different now that my brother already has a son.
My family taje care of him and he makes us happly.
>> My family takes care of him and he makes us happy.
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