My family in 10 years
학생이 쓴 원문
Ten years from now, my family will be happy.
My dad will work at his company, and my mom will work at the post office.
I will be a college student
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny!
This is such a sweet and hopeful paragraph. I love how you imagine a happy future for your family, it really shows how much you care about them. Your sentences are clear and easy to understand, and you expressed your ideas in a very natural way. I can tell you’re improving so much with your writing! Keep dreaming big and believing in yourself, Jenny.
~Teacher Cathy
Ten years from now, my family will be happy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Ten years from now, my family will live happily.
My dad will work at his company, and my mom will work at the post office.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My dad will continue working at his company, while my mom works at the post office.
I will be a college student.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I\'ll be a college student.
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