My family vacation
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From Monday to Tuesday was my family vacation in Manlipo. Our hotel was located right in front of the beach. There were a number of people who was learning how to surf even though it was raining! I also wanted to learn how to surf, but because of the weather, I gave up and decided to catch the chance next time. Instead of experiencing water sports, we ate barbecue like lamb,beef,chicken, and avocado. It was the most happy thing on the vacation.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
From Monday to Tuesday was my family vacation in Manlipo.
>> Correct.
Our hotel was located right in front of the beach.
>> Correct.
There were a number of people who was learning how to surf even though it was raining! I also wanted to learn how to surf, but because of the weather,
>> There were a number of people who were learning how to surf even though it was raining! I also wanted to learn how to surf, but because of the weather,
I gave up and decided to catch the chance next time.
>> I gave up and decided to do it next time.
Instead of experiencing water sports, we ate barbecue like lamb,beef,chicken, and avocado.
>> Correct.
It was the most happy thing on the vacation.
>> It was the happiest part of our vacation.
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