“My family was my guide to my reality.” -Adapted from Haywood Nelson

2018-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello ! I really like this sentence. :-) Because I usually ask my family for advice. Specially, My father always gives me the solution about interaction with people. when I fight with my friends, he told me how to solve this problems. Mother is my a mental supporter. When I was frustrated by fail, she told me the positive advice. Although younger brother entered the military these day, he also make me happy. So, they are my special guides. I can not live happy life without them.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dianne!

It\'s a good thing that you were able to answer the homework. Thank you for that!

Please check the corrections! Have a nice day!

T. Anne^^


I really like this sentence.

>>CORRECT!
 Because I usually ask my family for advice.

>>CORRECT!
Specially, My father always gives me the solution about interaction with people.

>>Especially for my father who always gives me the solution whenever I have problems with how I interact with other people.
 when I fight with my friends, he told me how to solve this problems.

>>When I have a fight with my friends, he always tells me how to solve this problem.
Mother is my a mental supporter.

>>My mother is the one who gives mental support to me.

When I was frustrated by fail, she told me the positive advice.

>>When I was frustrated because I failed, she gave a positive advice.
 Although younger brother entered the military these day, he also make me happy.

>>Even if my younger brother entered the military these days, he still makes me happy.
So, they are my special guides.

>>CORRECT!

I can not live happy life without them.

>>I cannot live a happy life without them.


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