My family will going to Cape Town, South Africa
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Hello, good morning, Mr. [이름]!
I am so happy to hear that your family will go there!
Those places are magnificent!
I am so excited to talk with you later!
My family will going to Cape Town, South Africa trancfer Hong Kong and Johannesburg.
>>My family will going to Cape Town and Johannesburg in South Africa via Hong Kong transfer.
My wifes son and daughter and sister-in-law, adults and mother-in-law
>>I will go there with my wife, son, daughter, sister-in-law, mother-in-law, and other adults.
Artisan adults are disabled People need a comfortable emergency exit seat that is uncomfortable.
>>Some adults are disabled so they need a comfortable emergency exit seat.
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