My famliy.

2014-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Theresa

학생이 쓴 원문

My English name is [이름]. And my Korea name is LEE KEYNG MUN. I have a one younger sister. MY father is very tall and handsome. My mother is pretty and smart. My sister is cuet. I love my famliy~~!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you so much for sending this. And telling me about your family. Well see you in class. Take care ~Teacher Theresa   My English name is [이름]. >> Correct. And my Korea name is LEE KEYNG MUN. >> And my Korean name is LEE KEYNG MUN.I have a one younger sister. >> I have a younger sister. MY father is very tall and handsome. >> Correct. My mother is pretty and smart. >> Correct. My sister is cuet. >> My sister is cute. I love my famliy~~! >> Correct.

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