My famliy.
학생이 쓴 원문
My English name is [이름]. And my Korea name is LEE KEYNG MUN.
I have a one younger sister. MY father is very tall and handsome. My mother is pretty and smart. My sister is cuet. I love my famliy~~!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you so much for sending this.
And telling me about your family.
Well see you in class.
Take care
~Teacher Theresa
My English name is [이름].
>> Correct.
And my Korea name is LEE KEYNG MUN.
>> And my Korean name is LEE KEYNG MUN.I have a one younger sister.
>> I have a younger sister.
MY father is very tall and handsome.
>> Correct.
My mother is pretty and smart.
>> Correct.
My sister is cuet.
>> My sister is cute.
I love my famliy~~!
>> Correct.
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