My famous park
학생이 쓴 원문
My famous park is named lake park.
The lake park is very large.
And, it has Cultural Heritage.
Third, it has so many roads to go there.
Finally, the lake park is very large.
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- Teacher Debbie
My famous park is named lake park.
>> One of the famous parks in Korea is named Lake Park.
The lake park is very large.
>> It is huge.
And, it has Cultural Heritage.
>> It is a cultural heritage.
Third, it has so many roads to go there.
>> There are so many roads leading to that park.
Finally, the lake park is very large.
>> You have already mentioned this.
- Teacher Debbie
My famous park is named lake park.
>> One of the famous parks in Korea is named Lake Park.
The lake park is very large.
>> It is huge.
And, it has Cultural Heritage.
>> It is a cultural heritage.
Third, it has so many roads to go there.
>> There are so many roads leading to that park.
Finally, the lake park is very large.
>> You have already mentioned this.
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