My fashion!
학생이 쓴 원문
Fashion is, after all, a role playing and cosplay.
On the other hand, fashion can be expressed as a personal preference.
And it is to complete individuality.
But I think fashion, which is overly personal in public, is rude.
I have my own fashion.
I tend to wear simple design and polite styles of clothing because of taking into account my social status.
I don\'t follow the fashion of the times.
Of course it can vary depending on the place and the situation
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
It\'s good for us to continue working hard.
We are shooting for something better than we are now.
Never give up.^^
~ Teacher Sharon
Fashion is, after all, a role playing and cosplay.
>> Fashion is like roleplay and cosplay.
On the other hand, fashion can be expressed as a personal preference.
On the other hand, fashion can be expressed as a personal preference.
>> Correct
And it is to complete individuality.
And it is to complete individuality.
>> It can complete individuality.
But I think fashion, which is overly personal in public, is rude.
But I think fashion, which is overly personal in public, is rude.
>> However, I think fashion, which is overly personal in public, is rude.
I have my own fashion.
I have my own fashion.
>> Correct
I tend to wear simple design and polite styles of clothing because of taking into account my social status.
I tend to wear simple design and polite styles of clothing because of taking into account my social status.
>> I tend to wear simple designs and polite styles of clothing because I take into account my social status.
I don\'t follow the fashion of the times.
I don\'t follow the fashion of the times.
>> I don\'t follow fashion trends.
Of course it can vary depending on the place and the situation
Of course it can vary depending on the place and the situation
>> Correct
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