My favor
학생이 쓴 원문
I will ask my friend to travel with me for one week. I want to travel long time and one week is very long time to me. I traveled with my friends for maximum three days. If I can travel with my friend for one week, I will go to many cities, climb mountain, and swim in the sea. It can be healing to me if I travel with my friend. I hope that my firend has the time and accept my favor. I expect our traveling and it\'s very long time not traveling other cities. I wish my dream will be come true.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework to me.
I hope that if you\'ll ask your friend this favor, your friend will accompany you.
I wish it will come true for you to have enjoy and build memories. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
I want to travel long time and one week is very long time to me.
>> I want to travel for long time and one week is a very long time to me.
I traveled with my friends for maximum three days.
>> I traveled with my friends for a maximum of three days.
If I can travel with my friend for one week, I will go to many cities, climb mountain, and swim in the sea.
>> If I can travel with my friend for one week, I will go to many cities, climb a mountain, and swim in the sea.
It can be healing to me if I travel with my friend.
>> It can be a healing to me if I travel with my friend.
I hope that my friend has the time and accept my favor.
>> CORRECT.
I expect our traveling and it\'s very long time not traveling other cities.
>> I expect us to travel since it\'s been a very long time since we traveled to other cities.
I wish my dream will be come true.
>> I wish my dream will come true.
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