My favorate place.
학생이 쓴 원문
What place would you love to visit and why?
I love to go to the woods. I like to walk the path in the woods and hear the sound that
stream makes. A fresh air and sound that birds, stream and leaves make make me peaceful and comfortable.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I love to go to the woods.
>>CORRECT!
I like to walk the path in the woods and hear the sound that stream makes.
>>CORRECT!
A fresh air and sound that birds, stream and leaves make make me peaceful and comfortable.
>> A fresh air and sound that birds, stream and leaves make me feel peaceful and comfortable.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.