My favorate restaurant

2010-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Min

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The restaurant I like most is 'Walking on the Cloud'. It is lacated in the '58th floor' of 63 building which is most tallest building in Korea. As you can feel in th name of the rastaurant, It is located on the very high position. So you can see all landscape of SEOUL. And the food is more beautiful than the landscape. They have great course meal consisiting of appitizer, soup, 2 main manu, dessert.

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Hi [이름] thank you for writing. Here are your corrections:   The restaurant I like most is 'Walking on the Cloud'. >> The restaurant I like the most is the Walking on the Cloud.  It is lacated in the '58th floor' of 63 building which is most tallest building in Korea. >> It is located on the 58th floor of a 63-storey building, which is considered the highest building in Korea.As you can feel in th name of the rastaurant, It is located on the very high position. >>Based on the name itself, you would know that it is located on the highest part of the building. So you can see all landscape of SEOUL. >>Overlooking from above is the city of Seoul.And the food is more beautiful than the landscape. >>But the food there is more attractive than the scenery . They have great course meal consisiting of appitizer, soup, 2 main manu, dessert. >>They have a great course of meal consisting of appetizer, a soup, two main dishes and dessert .

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