My favorite a activity is skate.
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My favorite a activity is skate.
It is in the saturday and sunday and sunday skate is very fun.
But legs are sick. I like skate because it is fun and healthy.
It is use the iegs. Skate is danger.
Because it\'s you can fall down.
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What\'s your favorite activity on weekdays? Why?
My favorite a activity is skate.
>> My favorite activity is skating.
It is in the saturday and sunday and sunday skate is very fun.
>> I go skating on weekends, and it\'s especially fun on Sundays.
But legs are sick.
>> But my legs are painful.
I like skate because it is fun and healthy.
>> I like skating because it is a fun and healthy activity.
It is use the iegs.
>> You use your legs when skating.
Skate is danger. Because it\'s you can fall down.
>> Skating is dangerous because you can fall down.
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