My favorite activites for school.
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Talking with my friens is my favorite activites for school. Because it can help to decrease my stress and feel happy.
And my less like taking a P.E class, which class play badminton, table tennis with my friends.
So, i like play with my friends everything. Friends are my best comfort people and they are my best friend.
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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
Talking with my friens is my favorite activites for school.
>> Talking with my friends is one of my favorite activities at school.
Because it can help to decrease my stress and feel happy.
>> That\'s because it can help lessen my stress and feel happy.
And my less like taking a P.E class, which class play badminton, table tennis with my friends.
>> And, my least favorite activity is the PE class wherein we play badminton and table tennis with my friends.
So, I like play with my friends everything.
>> So, I like playing and doing everything with my friends.
Friends are my best comfort people and they are my best friend.
>> CORRECT!
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