My favorite activities when i was a child
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My favorite activities were playing old-fashioned games outside with the friends who lived near my house like \"Squid game\", actually I did not play it, when I was a child.
>> My favorite activity was playing old-fashioned games outside with friends who lived near my house, like \"Squid Game,\" although I never actually played it when I was a child.
One of my favorite the game was hopscotch.
>> One of my favorite games was hopscotch.
It needs to draw 8 sections.
>> It requires drawing of 8 sections.
Next, the player throws a stone to the section and steps all the others sections and throws the stone to the next section and steps again.
>> Next, the player throws a stone onto one of the sections and hops on one foot to each of the other sections, then throws the stone to the next section and repeats the process.
I played it and others with my brother, cousin and friends.
>> I played hopscotch and other games with my brother, cousin, and friends.
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