My favorite App, YouTube
학생이 쓴 원문
Among all the apps on my smartphone, my favorite one is YouTue. Whenever I want to learn something new or see the world beyond my daily life, I open YouTube.
There are countless videos about anything I can imagine.
YouTube helps me explore the world freely anytime and anywhere.
It is like a window that connects me to people and ideas from all over the world.
I usually use YouTube to explore things I am curious about. Like if I want to watch a movies, check out a book, or learn more about someone especially a celebrity, I just search for related documentaries, interviews, or shows.
I really enjoy going deeper into topics I\\\'m interested in.
YouTube feels like a window to a bigger world for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name]! That’s such a lovely way to describe YouTube, “a window to a bigger world.” It’s amazing how one app can let us learn, explore, and feel connected to people everywhere. I can tell you really use it not just for fun, but for growing your knowledge and curiosity. That’s inspiring!
-T.Sonny
Among all the apps on my smartphone, my favorite one is YouTue. >>Among all the apps on my smartphone, my favorite one is YouTube.
Whenever I want to learn something new or see the world beyond my daily life, I open YouTube.
>>Correct!
There are countless videos about anything I can imagine.
There are countless videos about anything I can imagine.
>>Correct!
YouTube helps me explore the world freely anytime and anywhere.
YouTube helps me explore the world freely anytime and anywhere.
>>YouTube helps me explore the world freely, anytime and anywhere.It is like a window that connects me to people and ideas from all over the world.
>>Correct!
I usually use YouTube to explore things I am curious about.
I usually use YouTube to explore things I am curious about.
>>Correct!
Like if I want to watch a movies, check out a book, or learn more about someone especially a celebrity, I just search for related documentaries, interviews, or shows.
>>For example, if I want to watch a movie, check out a book, or learn more about someone, especially a celebrity, I just search for related documentaries, interviews, or shows.I really enjoy going deeper into topics I\\\'m interested in.
>>I really enjoy going deeper into topics I’m interested in.YouTube feels like a window to a bigger world for me.
>>Correct!
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