My Favorite Artist
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Hello [이름] my dear,.^^
Your writing skill is pretty impressive..You could express yourself using good vocabularies and expressions that can make your composition much better!Keep up the good work!
Im so proud to say that you are not just a very good speaker, but likewise a very good writer...I commend you for a job well done..
Talk to you again later my dear
T.Cam
Um.. It is hard to say.
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I don't know many artists.
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Among them, I like "Van gogh" who is very famous for his pictures.
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I don't know exactly.
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but when I look at his picture , I feel comfortable.
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One of my favorite picture is called "Sunflower"
>>One of my favorite pictures is called "The Sunflower"
Not long ago, I used that picture as the wallpaper of my cellphone.
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He is also very famous in our country.
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Though they don't know his name, they probably know his pictures.
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