My favorite beverage
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My favorite beverage is strawberry latte. After school or swimming when I drink strawberry latte, it is so sweet as well as cool. This taste is really perfect. I like mixing strawberries and milk. It is very sweet because of some sugar and syrup. I also feel so good when I’m chewing sliced strawberries in it. That is maybe kind of addictive.
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My favorite beverage is strawberry latte. After school or swimming when I
drink strawberry latte, it is so sweet as well as cool. This taste is
really perfect. I like mixing strawberries and milk. It is very sweet
because of some sugar and syrup. I also feel so good when I’m chewing
sliced strawberries in it. That is maybe kind of addictive.
>> My favorite beverage is strawberry latte. After school or swimming when I
drink strawberry latte, it is so sweet as well as cool. This taste is
really perfect. I like mixing strawberries and milk. It is very sweet
because of some sugar and syrup. I also feel so good when I’m chewing
sliced strawberries in it. That is maybe kind of addictive.
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