My favorite board game is \'Halli Galli\'.
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My favorite board game is \'Halli Galli\'.
It\'s a game that when the fruit of the card given by the other and I are the same fruit, and the number is five, the first bell is struck.
So, if I have to win this game, I need quickness.
Also, When I participate in this game, I\'m always nervous, but it\'s so funny.
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Hi Kara!^^
Andrea
It\'s a game that when the fruit of the card given by the other and I are the same fruit, and the number is five, the first bell is struck.
So, if I have to win this game, I need quickness.
Also, When I participate in this game, I\'m always nervous, but it\'s so funny.
My favorite board game is Snakes and Ladders.
It is a game of luck.
It\'s fun to play it with friends.
Andrea
My favorite board game is \'Halli Galli\'.
>> Correct
It\'s a game that when the fruit of the card given by the other and I are the same fruit, and the number is five, the first bell is struck.
>> In this game, when my fruit card is the same as the one given by the other player, and the number is five, I should be the first one to strike the bell.
So, if I have to win this game, I need quickness.
>> So in order to win the game, I have to be quick.
Also, When I participate in this game, I\'m always nervous, but it\'s so funny.
>> I feel nervous when I join this game, but on the other hand, it\'s fun.
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