My favorite book

2010-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

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I like to read various kinds of books like Novel, economy, technolongy.. etc. But my favorit book is to read self-improvement books. Whenever I feel exhausted, I read these books and feel refreshed. Recently, I read the book titled Winning Habits. It taught me the way to achieve the goal. I like the line that the Singer rain said, When you sleep, you have a dream, but when you don't sleep you can realize your dream. I will keep that in my mind and try to make my dream come true.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!   I actually love reading books, especially novels.. The only self-improvement book I have read is Chicken Soup for the Soul… I recommend for you to read it because it has various stories about real life experiences and how the writers overcame the obstacles in their lives.. It is a very good book… Anyway, the saying from Rain, I agree with him.. I will also remember that.. Dreams do come true.. ^_^ See you later!!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy   I have a few corrections on the composition   I like to read various kinds of books like Novel, economy, technolongy.. etc. But my favorit book is to read self-improvement books.>> I like to read various kinds of books like novel, economy, technology books, etc. But my favorite is to read self-improvement books.Recently, I read the book titled Winning Habits. It taught me the way to achieve the goal. >> Recently, I read the book entitled Winning Habits. It taught me the way to achieve my goal. I like the line that the Singer rain said, When you sleep, you have a dream, but when you don't sleep you can realize your dream. >> I like the line that the singer Rain said, "When you sleep, you have a dream, but when you don't sleep you can realize your dream."

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