My Favorite Book and Character
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite book is \'Human Acts\' which is written by Han-Gang. This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical accidents in Korea. The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strife of citizens for a democratic state. At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron hand, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong. The author knew that progenies shouldn\'t forget past struggles, so she wrote a novel based on a true story. All characters in the novel fight to a desperate death against the government in their own particular way. Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think a character who most makes me cry is my favorite character. His first name is [이름]-Dae. He dies at the beginning of the book, for he takes a bullet by a soldier, however, I was touched by what he says when he becomes a ghost. He is enraged by the government, and misses family.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Su [이름]! ~~
I had no idea you liked history books!
I\'m excited to hear more in our classes.
I am very interested in Korean history, and I would love to hear stories from you. ^^
~t. Ally
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My favorite book is \'Human Acts\' which is written by Han-Gang.
>> CORRECT!
This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical accidents in Korea.
>> This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical incidents in Korea.
The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strife of citizens for a democratic state.
>> The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strike of citizens for a democratic state.
At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron hand, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron fist, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong.
The author knew that progenies shouldn\'t forget past struggles, so she wrote a novel based on a true story.
>> CORRECT!
All characters in the novel fight to a desperate death against the government in their own particular way.
>> All characters in the novel desperately fight to death against the government in their own particular way.
Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think a character who most makes me cry is my favorite character.
>> Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think the character who made me cry the most is my favorite.
His first name is [이름]-Dae. He dies at the beginning of the book, for he takes a bullet by a soldier, however, I was touched by what he says when he becomes a ghost.
>> CORRECT!
He is enraged by the government, and misses family.
>> CORRECT!
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