My Favorite Book and Character

2020-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite book is \'Human Acts\' which is written by Han-Gang. This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical accidents in Korea. The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strife of citizens for a democratic state. At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron hand, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong. The author knew that progenies shouldn\'t forget past struggles, so she wrote a novel based on a true story. All characters in the novel fight to a desperate death against the government in their own particular way. Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think a character who most makes me cry is my favorite character. His first name is [이름]-Dae. He dies at the beginning of the book, for he takes a bullet by a soldier, however, I was touched by what he says when he becomes a ghost. He is enraged by the government, and misses family.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Su [이름]! ~~

I had no idea you liked history books! 
I\'m excited to hear more in our classes.
I am very interested in Korean history, and I would love to hear stories from you. ^^

~t. Ally



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My favorite book is \'Human Acts\' which is written by Han-Gang. 
>> CORRECT!

This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical accidents in Korea. 
>> This book is about the Gwangju Democratization Movement which is one of the most important historical incidents in Korea. 

The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strife of citizens for a democratic state.
>> The Gwangju Democratization Movement is a strike of citizens for a democratic state.

At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron hand, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> At that time, the army group tried to rule with an iron fist, and they killed innocent people simply because people knew that a dictatorial government was wrong.

The author knew that progenies shouldn\'t forget past struggles, so she wrote a novel based on a true story. 
>> CORRECT!

All characters in the novel fight to a desperate death against the government in their own particular way. 
>> All characters in the novel desperately fight to death against the government in their own particular way.

Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think a character who most makes me cry is my favorite character. 
>> Therefore, it is hard for me to choose a favorite character, but I think the character who made me cry the most is my favorite.

His first name is [이름]-Dae. He dies at the beginning of the book, for he takes a bullet by a soldier, however, I was touched by what he says when he becomes a ghost. 
>> CORRECT!

He is enraged by the government, and misses family.
>> CORRECT!

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