My favorite book is
학생이 쓴 원문
is a beautiful and interesting story where four friends gather to make egg tart, and it makes each other feel free to get acquainted with each other, and later make their own bucket list together, and become even closer. give me some very important things. Friendship are important, sometimes you can rest. This book is my favorite book of my life.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Maria!
Even if you have forgotten to write the title of the book, that\'s alright because you have explained the theme of its story. Friendship is absolutely important as we cannot rely on ourselves alone and our families all the time.
So, thanks for writing this composition and see you next week!
-T. Donna =)
>> ___________ is a beautiful and interesting story where four friends gathered to make egg tart, and it made each other feel free to get acquainted, and later make their own bucket list together and became even closer. It gave me some very important things.
Friendship are important, sometimes you can rest.
>> Friendship is important, sometimes you can rest.
This book is my favorite book of my life.
>> This book is important in my life.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.