My favorite childhood experience
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My favorite experience is when I practiced to ride a bike at first. My father taught me how to ride a bike. He lied me that he was holding my bike but actually he wasn\'t. Although I blamed my father for betrayed me, I finally rode a bike on my own at that time. Thanks to this experience, I am able to ride a bike until now days.
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Hi [이름]. Wow. Thanks for sharing. :)
-T. Gabby :)
My favorite experience is when I practiced to ride a bike at first.
>> My favorite experience was when I practiced riding the bike for the first time.
My father taught me how to ride a bike.
>> Correct.
He lied me that he was holding my bike but actually he wasn\'t.
>> He lied to me that he was holding my bike but actually he wasn\'t.
Although I blamed my father for betrayed me, I finally rode a bike on my own at that time.
>> Although I blamed my father for lying to me, I finally rode a bike on my own at that time.
Thanks to this experience, I am able to ride a bike until now days.
>> Thanks to that experience, I can now bike even until now.
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