My favorite childhood memories that I remember
학생이 쓴 원문
The most fun childhood memories I have is Family trip in Jeju island.
I remembered watching the beautiful beach and swimming there.
I had eaten Black pig barbecue that is the most famous food in Jeju, tangerines.
I want to visit there if time allows.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! I\'m glad to hear this experience of yours. I also sometimes miss my childhood experiences. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you and stay safe! ~T. Lyn
The most fun childhood memories I have is Family trip in Jeju island.
>>My fondest memory as a child is our family trip to Jeju Island.
I remembered watching the beautiful beach and swimming there.
I remembered watching the beautiful beach and swimming there.
>>I remember looking at the beautiful beach and swimming there.
I had eaten Black pig barbecue that is the most famous food in Jeju, tangerines.
I had eaten Black pig barbecue that is the most famous food in Jeju, tangerines.
>>I ate the most famous foods in Jeju, the black pig barbecue and tangerines.
I want to visit there if time allows.
I want to visit there if time allows.
>>Correct. If time permits, I definitely want to go there again.
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