My favorite class

2010-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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My favorite class was 3D design. We used both a book and computer in that class. I liked that class because I liked drawing as well as using a computer. We drew something mechanical which our professor gave us as an assignment in each clss time. Sometimes it was hard. but as it gots more difficult, I was happier when I accomplished it. Since I drew well , my friends would ask me what they didn't know.

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Hi [이름]. You're favorite class was interesting since 3D design is becoming in demand major now.I really wonder how do you do it before since I don't have any idea of this..kkkk I guess you could design your ideal car or machine one of these days..   My favorite class was 3D design. >>CorrectWe used both a book and computer in that class. >>CorrectI liked that class because I liked drawing >>Correctas well as using a computer.>>Correct >> as well as using computer.We drew something mechanical which our professorgave us as an assignment in each clss time.>> We drew something mechanical which our professorgave us as an assignment in every class timeSometimes it was hard. >>Correct but as it gots more difficult, >>GoesI was happier when I accomplished it.>>Correct Since I drew well , my friends would ask me what they didn't >>Correct >>Add “Know”  

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