My favorite cold drink
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite cold drink is Banana shake. So I will make a glass of banana shake! First, mash up bananas. Seond, Mix bananas and some milk. Third, eat deliciously!!
강사 첨삭
Writing task: Write down the ingredients (성분) and recipe (조리법) of your favorite cold drink!
My favorite cold drink is Banana shake.
>> CORRECT!
So I will make a glass of banana shake!
>> So, I will make a glass of banana shake!
First, mash up bananas.
>> First, mash up the bananas.
Seond, Mix bananas and some milk.
>> Second, Mix the bananas with some milk.
Third, eat deliciously!!
>> Third, Enjoy your delicious Banana shake!
Dear [이름],
Happy Thursday dear!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Reading about your banana shake made me excited!
I can\'t wait to try to make it at home, too!
I will follow your recipe and I will call it \" [이름]\'s special banana shake\"
Please keep on writing. It will help you improve your sentence construction.
Review and practice the corrections I made for you.
Take care!
~ ♥♥ T. Louise ♥♥
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