My favorite day
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My favorite day is obviously Saturday. Most of all the following day is Sunday. It makes me feel very excited when I think I can play a day more. Second reason is that I can do lots of things such as playing games, watching movies and playing with my friends on Saturday. Lastly, It is weekend so I feel really comfortable and I can relax.
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Hi [이름]
See you in our class today. Good job in your homework ^^
T. DON
My favorite day is obviously Saturday. Most of all the following day is
Sunday. It makes me feel very excited when I think I can play a day
more. Second reason is that I can do lots of things such as playing
games, watching movies and playing with my friends on Saturday. Lastly,
It is weekend so I feel really comfortable and I can relax.
>> CORRECT! very good sentences! Keep it up!
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