My favorite drink is Cider!

Cider is my favorite drink! Most people like coke! But I and my father like cider! Cider has acid like coke! So, it is pungent~ And than, it has lemon lime! It is clean than coke,too!!! Ha~Ha~ Most people want drink from this taste! When we ate some pork or steak, we will drink Cider! When we have terrible indigestion, we will drink Cider,too! Other drink is delicious,too! But My favorite drink is Cider! And it is not good for our health~^^ So we drink some of Cider!

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Cider is my favorite drink!
>> Correct
Most people like coke!
>> Correct
But I and my father like cider!
>> But me and my father like cider!
>> But my father and I like cider!
Cider has acid like coke!
>> Correct
So, it is pungent~
>> Correct
And than, it has lemon lime!
>> And then, it has lime!
>> And then, it has lemon!
It is clean than coke,too!!! Ha~Ha~
>> It is cleaner than coke, too!^^
Most people want drink from this taste!
>> Most people want to drink this because of it\'s taste!
When we ate some pork or steak, we will drink Cider!
>> When we eat some pork or steak, we drink cider!
When we have terrible indigestion, we will drink Cider,too!
>> Correct
Other drink is delicious,too!
>> Other drinks are delicious, too!
But my favorite drink is Cider!
>> Correct
And it is not good for our health~^^
>> Correct
So we drink some of Cider!
>> So we drink some cider!