My favorite fairy tale characters
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My favorite fairy tale characters are dwarfs. Lots of children like main characters like princes or princesses, but I think princes and princesses are just look-good main characters. Real kind, diligent, and nice characters are dwarfs in Snow White. Though they are not handsome, but they are very nice characters. I respect them, so my favorite fairy characters are dwarfs.
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Hi, Daniel! Your reply is the
perfect answer to the given question. You
were able to use good expressions. Excellent!
- Teacher Debbie
>> This is a good sentence.
Lots of children like main characters like princes or princesses, but I think princes and princesses are just look-good main characters.
>> Lots of children like the main characters, such as princes or princesses, but I think they are just good-looking.
Real kind, diligent, and nice characters are dwarfs in Snow White.
>> Snow White\'s dwarfs are kind, diligent, and nice.
Though they are not handsome, but they are very nice characters.
>> Though they are not handsome, they are very nice.
I respect them, so my favorite fairy characters are dwarfs.
>> I respect them, so they are my favorite fairy tale characters.
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