my favorite fast food

My favorite fast food is Pizza. Especially I like to go to Pizza Hut, because restaurant of Pizza Hut has salad bar and Pizza hut is common restaurant around me. Maybe Pizza hut is more popular than other Pizza restaurant. I rarely go to Mr.Pizza because Mr.Pizza's menu is limited in seafood. I like bacon rather than shrimp. Actually I don't like almost fast food. I think only pizza is delicious but I'm sorry to it has high calories. So I eat pizza once a two months. In Case of Hamburgers is once a year. I don't like hamburgers, because hamburgers aren't suit my taste. On the other hand, I eat toast often during semester. Although I try to eat toast, mostly I don't eat anything. because I'm too busy to eat anything. During semester I really want to eat slow food made by my mother.

Hello [이름], You are very healthy!!  For me, I often eat fast food because it’s very convenient for me. I have to avoid it because it’s not good, haha. Here are the corrections. Stay safe,  Connie   My favorite fast food is Pizza. >> Correct Especially I like to go to Pizza Hut, because restaurant of Pizza Hut has salad bar and Pizza hut is common restaurant around me. >> I like going to pizza hut because they offer salads and we can also see it is also common around me. Maybe Pizza hut is more popular than other Pizza restaurant. >> Maybe Pizza Hut is more popular than other Pizza restaurants.  I rarely go to Mr.Pizza because Mr.Pizza's menu is limited in seafood. >> I rarely go to Mr.Pizza because Mr.Pizza's menu is limited to seafoods. I like bacon rather than shrimp. >> CorrectActually I don't like almost fast food. >> Actually, I almost don’t like fast foods. I think only pizza is delicious but I'm sorry to it has high calories. >> Pizza is the only fast food that is delicious for me but I feel  sorry to my self because it is a high calorie food.  So I eat pizza once a two months. >> So, I only eat pizza one in two months.  In Case of Hamburgers is once a year. >> For hamburgers, I only eat it once a year.  I don't like hamburgers, because hamburgers aren't suit my taste. >> I don't like hamburgers, because hamburgers aren't suiting my taste. On the other hand, I eat toast often during semester. >> Correct Although I try to eat toast, mostly I don't eat anything because I'm too busy to eat anything. >> Most of the time I don’t eat anything because I’m so busy to do that. Nevertheless, I’m trying to eat some toasted bread for my meal. During semester I really want to eat slow food made by my mother. >> During the semester I really want to eat home-coked foods by my mother.