My favorite fast food and reasons

I like fast food and enjoy eating. Especially, I like pizza very much.Because I like cheese,it's not only good for health but also delicious. Whenever I eat my meal, I don't forget to eat cheese.Nowdays, there are many kinds of pizza that are sweet, spicy and salty, etc. So I can chose by my style. And texture of cheese is so great like chewing gum.And among many pizza restaurants,I like 'Mr.pizza' very much. Because of sweet taste and sauce.If someone ask me 'Which restaurant's pizza is the most delicious?' I'll suggest this restaurant.Despite I ate dinner, I want to eat pizza.I'll expect this weekend.

Hi [이름], As I was reading your composition I’m full but I’m craving for pizza. We are talking about it with my friend, she wants pizza, too. Anyway, here are the corrections.See you tonight, Connie I like fast food and enjoy eating. >> I like and enjoy eating fast food. Especially, I like pizza very much.Because I like cheese,it's not only good for health but also delicious. >> I like pizza the most because I like cheese, it’s not only good for our health but it’s also delicious.  Whenever I eat my meal, I don't forget to eat cheese. >> Correct Nowdays, there are many kinds of pizza that are sweet, spicy and salty, etc. >> Nowadays, there are many flavors of pizza, some are sweet, spicy, salty, etc. So I can chose by my style. >> SO I can choose what I want. And texture of cheese is so great like chewing gum. >> The texture of a cheese is so great like a chewing gum. And among many pizza restaurants,I like 'Mr.pizza' very much. >> Among all the pizza restaurants, I like Mr. [Name] the most.  Because of sweet taste and sauce. >> They serve pizza with a sweet taste and sauce. If someone ask me 'Which restaurant's pizza is the most delicious?' I'll suggest this restaurant. >> If someone asks me about the restaurant who serves delicious pizza, I suggest Mr. [Name]. Despite I ate dinner, I want to eat pizza.I'll expect this weekend. >> Aside from my dinner, I want to eat pizza, I’ll be expecting this weekend.