My favorite female superhero.
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I have a lot of favorite movies.
>> Correct
Among them, ‘Ghostbusters’ is a movie about female super heros.
>> Among them is ‘Ghostbusters’ which is a movie about female superheroes.
They fight ghosts and save the world.
>> Correct
The movie also fun.
>> The movie was also fun.
So, when i feel gloomy i watch this movie, because it makes me cheerful.
>> So, when i feel gloomy, I watch this movie because it cheers me up.
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