My favorite flavor of ice cream
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I have two favorite flavors of ice cream. Firstly, Pangsoo ishucream in Baskin Rabins because It’s like eating Puss in Boots that I like with honey shucream. Secondly, I like shutting star ice cream in Baskin Rabins because when I bite it I feel like I have a lot of stars tasted berries in my mouth.
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>> I have two favorite flavors of ice cream. Firstly, Pangsoo ishucream
in Baskin Rabins because It’s like eating Puss in Boots that I like
with honey shucream. Secondly, I like shutting star ice cream also in Baskin
Rabins because when I bite it I feel like I have a lot of stars tasted
berries in my mouth.
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