My favorite food
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My favorite food is a kind of noodle. Especially, I like the Korean noodle. There is a lot of noodles like Japan Ramen, Vietnam noodle and pasta. However, I like the spicy and salty of the Korean noodle. Also, I like to eat the tomato spaghetti. On weekends, I cook the tomato spaghetti at home and eat.
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Hi Soo An!
Thank you for your composition.
I gave you a simple question this time.
I just wanted to have a point of comparison with your IELTS Writing.
Let\'s talk about what you need to work on in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My favorite food is a kind of noodle.
>> My favorite food is a kind of noodles.
Especially, I like the Korean noodle.
>> I especially like Korean noodles.
There is a lot of noodles like Japan Ramen, Vietnam noodle and pasta.
>> There are lots of kinds of noodles like Japanese ramen, Vietnamese noodles and pasta.
However, I like the spicy and salty of the Korean noodle.
>> However, I like the spiciness and saltiness of Korean noodles.
Also, I like to eat the tomato spaghetti.
>> I also like to eat tomato spaghetti.
On weekends, I cook the tomato spaghetti at home and eat.
>> On weekends, I cook tomato spaghetti at home and eat.
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