My favorite food
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My favorite food is what matches with beer. I\'m a beer lover. I love the mood drinking beer with good food especially after work with my loved ones. Fried chicken, pizza, french fried(kind of fried potato sticks), Jeon(Korean pancakes) etc. Lately a new pizza restaurant opened in my neighborhood. They served hand made pizza not chain pizza. I could tell all ingredients they use in the pizza are very fresh and delicious, and sometimes they revealed some new pizza too. I thought they put their efforts into the pizza.They baked the pizza in their own stove. When I visited there to pick up the pizza I ordered, there was filled with good flavor of cheese and fresh meals. The bad thing of this pizza is a little bit salty. I tend to eat more than usual when food is salty because it can increase my appetite. Plus it can make drink more beer or coke. Delicious food finally lead to over eating? But I don\'t eat this tasty pizza every day so I might keep enjoying this pizza and beer ever forever.
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Hi!
Thank you for submitting your essay!
I truly appreciate you for sharing about your favorite food. It\'s always nice to know about good food and drinks that give us happiness, especially after working hard. ^^ I also fixed some of the sentences to correct the grammar and made them more natural.
~ Teacher Gina
My favorite food is what matches with beer. I\'m a beer lover.
My favorite food is what matches with beer. I\'m a beer lover.
>> CORRECT.
I love the mood drinking beer with good food especially after work with my loved ones.
>> I love the mood of drinking beer with good food, especially after work with my loved ones.
>> Or: I love the atmosphere of drinking beer with good food, especially after work with my loved ones.
Fried chicken, pizza, french fried(kind of fried potato sticks), Jeon(Korean pancakes) etc.
>> Fried chicken, pizza, French fries (a kind of fried potato sticks), and jeon (Korean pancakes), etc., are some of my favorite foods.
Lately a new pizza restaurant opened in my neighborhood.
>> Lately, a new pizza restaurant has opened in my neighborhood.
They served hand made pizza not chain pizza.
>> They serve handmade pizza instead of chain pizza.
I could tell all ingredients they use in the pizza are very fresh and delicious, and sometimes they revealed some new pizza too.
>> I could tell all ingredients they use in the pizza are very fresh and delicious, and sometimes they reveal new pizzas too.
>> Or: I can tell that all the ingredients they use are very fresh and delicious, and sometimes they introduce new pizzas as well.
I thought they put their efforts into the pizza.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I believe they put a lot of effort into making their pizza.
They baked the pizza in their own stove.
>> They bake the pizza in their own oven.
When I visited there to pick up the pizza I ordered, there was filled with good flavor of cheese and fresh meals.
>> When I visited to pick up my pizza, the place was filled with the delicious smell of cheese and fresh meals.
The bad thing of this pizza is a little bit salty.
>> The bad thing about this pizza is that it is a little bit salty.
>> Or: The downside of this pizza is that it is a little salty.
I tend to eat more than usual when food is salty because it can increase my appetite.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I usually eat more when food is salty because it boosts my appetite.
Plus it can make drink more beer or coke.
>> Plus, it makes me want to drink more beer or coke.
Delicious food finally lead to over eating?
>> Does delicious food eventually lead to overeating?
But I don\'t eat this tasty pizza every day so I might keep enjoying this pizza and beer ever forever.
>> But I don’t eat this tasty pizza every day, so I might keep enjoying pizza and beer forever.
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