My favorite food!!
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Title: MY favorite food!!
Before, my favorite food was 'Samgyetang'!
But nowadays, My favorite food is 'sujebi'!!
Sujebi's main ingredients are small octopus meat stock and dough!!
Oh~~~~~ My mouth is watering!!
I introduce this food!!^^
강사 첨삭
Awesome Monday to you!
Wow! I think your favorite food nowadays is really mouth-watering. I hope that I can taste that too. Anyway, I appreciate you sharing your favorite food. Let\'s talk more about it later.
--T. MEG--^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
Title: MY favorite food!!
>>>Title: My favorite food!!Before, my favorite food was \'Samgyetang\'!
>>>Correct!
OR
>>>My favorite food before was samgyetang.But nowadays, My favorite food is \'sujebi\'!!
>>>But nowadays, my favorite food is sujebi.
Sujebi\'s main ingredients are small octopus meat stock and dough!!>>>Sujebi\'s main ingredients are small octopus, meat stock, and dough.
Oh~~~~~ My mouth is watering!!
>>>Oh, my mouth is watering!^_^I introduce this food!!^^
>>>I want to introduce this food!
OR
>>>I want to promote this food!
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