My favorite food!!

2012-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Title: MY favorite food!! Before, my favorite food was 'Samgyetang'! But nowadays, My favorite food is 'sujebi'!! Sujebi's main ingredients are small octopus meat stock and dough!! Oh~~~~~ My mouth is watering!! I introduce this food!!^^

강사 첨삭

Awesome Monday to you! Wow! I think your favorite food nowadays is really mouth-watering. I hope that I can taste that too. Anyway, I appreciate you sharing your favorite food. Let\'s talk more about it later. --T. MEG--^_^ Here are my corrections for you: Title: MY favorite food!! >>>Title: My favorite food!!Before, my favorite food was \'Samgyetang\'! >>>Correct! OR >>>My favorite food before was samgyetang.But nowadays, My favorite food is \'sujebi\'!! >>>But nowadays, my favorite food is sujebi. Sujebi\'s main ingredients are small octopus meat stock and dough!!>>>Sujebi\'s main ingredients are small octopus, meat stock, and dough. Oh~~~~~ My mouth is watering!! >>>Oh, my mouth is watering!^_^I introduce this food!!^^ >>>I want to introduce this food! OR >>>I want to promote this food!

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