My favorite food.

2010-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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Hi teacher, Always thank you for doing that. My favorite food is kimchi stew. It is kind of stew made by kimchi. and It is one of the most popular foods in korea. I like it because I like eating kimchi very much. and I can't imagine the meal without kimchi. But all kimchi stew isn't delicious. I am gonna introduce good restaurant. It is located in my neighborhood. It opened last year and got popular because It served delicious foods. and Kimchi stew is the representative food in that restaurant. Since I like it very much, I go there at least once a week.

강사 첨삭

hi student!^^ I wish I could try that restaurant, but I'm miles away. Anyway, just enjoy the stew then. By the way, I didn't understand your first line here--you want to thank me? for what? Here are your corrections:-Teacher JM   Hi teacher, >>>CorrectAlways thank you for doing that. >>>I always want to thank you for that.(what?)My favorite food is kimchi stew. >>>CorrectIt is kind of stew made by kimchi. >>>It is a kind of stew made of kimchi.and It is one of the most popular foods in korea. >>>And it is one of the most popular foods in korea.I like it because I like eating kimchi very much. >>>And it is one of the most popular foods in korea.and I can't imagine the meal without kimchi. >>>I can't imagine a meal without kimchi. But all kimchi stew isn't delicious. >>>But all kimchi stews aren't delicious.I am gonna introduce good restaurant. >>>I am gonna introduce a good restaurant.It is located in my neighborhood.  >>>CorrectIt opened last year and got popular because It served delicious foods. >>>Correctand Kimchi stew is the representative food in that restaurant. >>>Kimchi stew is the representative food in that restaurant. >>>Kimchi stew is the specialty of that restaurant.Since I like it very much, I go there at least once a week. >>>Correct

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