My favorite food is Kimchi.

2019-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Near my house, there are many restaurant. And I grow my pet mice on my living room. They eat a handful of seeds of grain everyday. At night, I participated at an quiz show helding on the internet. Everyday I eat a lot of food as I like. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night!

Talk to you tomorrow ☺


Near my house, there are many restaurant.

>> There are many restaurants near my house.


And I grow my pet mice on my living room.

>> Also, I keep my pet in my living room.


They eat a handful of seeds of grain everyday.

>> CORRECT


At night, I participated at an quiz show helding on the internet.

>> At night, I take a quiz online.

>> OR: I take a quiz on the internet at night.


Everyday I eat a lot of food as I like.

>> I eat as much food as I like everyday.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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