My favorite food is Kimchi.
학생이 쓴 원문
Near my house, there are many restaurant.
And I grow my pet mice on my living room.
They eat a handful of seeds of grain everyday.
At night, I participated at an quiz show helding on the internet.
Everyday I eat a lot of food as I like.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great night!
Talk to you tomorrow ☺
Near my house, there are many restaurant.
>> There are many restaurants near my house.
And I grow my pet mice on my living room.
>> Also, I keep my pet in my living room.
They eat a handful of seeds of grain everyday.
>> CORRECT
At night, I participated at an quiz show helding on the internet.
>> At night, I take a quiz online.
>> OR: I take a quiz on the internet at night.
Everyday I eat a lot of food as I like.
>> I eat as much food as I like everyday.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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