My favorite food is tteok-bokki.
학생이 쓴 원문
I love tteok-bokki.
My wife and I often order and eat it.
We always eat spicy one.
It sis called spicy tteok-bokki.
When I eat it, it is delicious.
But I heard that it is bad for my stomach.
Sometimes I have a stomachache after eating it.
I eat less than I used to, but I will keep eating.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Reading about food in your composition made me hungry! haha. Thanks for the effort in writing. Most of your sentences are grammatically correct and well-written! Keep up the good work ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
My wife and I often order and eat it.
My wife and I often order and eat it.
>>CORRECT!
We always eat spicy one.
We always eat spicy one.
>>We always eat the spicy one.
It sis called spicy tteok-bokki.
>>It is called spicy tteok-bokki.
When I eat it, it is delicious.
When I eat it, it is delicious.
>>CORRECT!
But I heard that it is bad for my stomach.
But I heard that it is bad for my stomach.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes I have a stomachache after eating it.
Sometimes I have a stomachache after eating it.
>>CORRECT!
I eat less than I used to, but I will keep eating.
I eat less than I used to, but I will keep eating.
>>CORRECT!
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