My favorite foods
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I introduce my self about my favorite food.
My favorite food is tteokbokki . It is very spicy and sweet.
The most prominent feature about this food is rice cake. rice cake is the major material for making tteokbokki.
So, rice cake is important.
Making tteokbokki is easy. Put rice cake, fish cake, red pepper paste and onion in hot water. And boil just 5 minutes.
This food simple, but it is really delicious.
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HI [이름]. Thanks for sharing. :)
- T. Gabby :)
I introduce my self about my favorite food.
>> I want to share about my favorite food.
My favorite food is tteokbokki .
My favorite food is tteokbokki .
>> Correct.
It is very spicy and sweet.
>> Correct.
The most prominent feature about this food is rice cake. Rice cake is the major material for making tteokbokki.
The most prominent feature about this food is rice cake. Rice cake is the major material for making tteokbokki.
>> The most prominent feature about this food is rice cake. Rice cake is the main ingredient in making tteokbokki.
So, rice cake is important.
So, rice cake is important.
>> Correct.
Making tteokbokki is easy.
Making tteokbokki is easy.
>> Correct.
Put rice cake, fish cake, red pepper paste and onion in hot water.
>> Correct.
And boil just 5 minutes.
>> And let in boil for 5 minutes.
This food simple, but it is really delicious.
This food simple, but it is really delicious.
>> Correct.
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