My favorite fruits
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite food is plum
First, the plum is very soft.
Second, the plum is very delicious.
Third, plum is fresh
Finally, it can heal the constipation. So, I can go to bathroom often
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My favorite food is plum
>> My favorite food is plum.
First, the plum is very soft.
>> It is very soft.
Second, the plum is very delicious.
>> It is very delicious.
Third, plum is fresh
>> It is fresh.
>> It is fresh.
Finally, it can heal the constipation.
>> Moreover, it can relieve constipation,
So, I can go to bathroom often
>> so I can often go to the bathroom.
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