My favorite healthy foods.

2020-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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First, thank you a lot. You said, I am turly improving every day. Thanks again. My favorite healthy foods not have. I research internet what I eat healthy foods. My healthy foods are tomato, onion,green onion, garlic, kind of blueberry etc. I prefer vegetables and fish than meats. Many people seems that. My favorite foods are noodles, bread and coffee etc. The flour foods aren\'t health. And I seldom not eat its. Did you have a nice today? It was very hot here today. But I walked 10,000 stepps. How\'s weather in summer there? I didn\'t go to the Southeast Asia. Good night Gabby.

강사 첨삭

Hi Suzan. Stay healthy. :)
- T. Gabby.
First, thank you a lot.
>> First, thanks a lot.
You said, I am turly improving every day. Thanks again.
>> As you said, I am truly improving every day. Thanks again.
My favorite healthy foods not have.
>> I don\'t have my favorite healthy food.
I research internet what I eat healthy foods.
>> I researched on the internet the healthy foods that I eat,
My healthy foods are tomato, onion,green onion, garlic, kind of blueberry etc.
>> I eat tomatoes, onions, green onions, garlic and blueberry.
I prefer vegetables and fish than meats.
>> Correct.
Many people seems that.
>> Many people like that.
My favorite foods are noodles, bread and coffee etc.
>> My favorite foods are noodles, bread and coffee.
The flour foods aren\'t health. And I seldom not eat its.
>> I seldom eat unhealthy foods made of flour.
Did you have a nice today? 
>> Correct.
It was very hot here today. 
>> Correct.
But I walked 10,000 steps.
>> Correct.
How\'s weather in summer there?
>> How\'s the summer weather there?
I didn\'t go to the Southeast Asia.
>> I haven\'t been to Southeast Asia.
Good night Gabby.
>> Correct.

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