My favorite hobby

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Commas (,)

The comma is a valuable, useful punctuation device because it separates the structural elements of sentences into manageable segments. The rules provided here are those found in traditional handbooks; however, in certain rhetorical contexts and for specific purposes, these rules may be broken.

The following is a short guide to get you started using commas.

1. Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet.

2. Use commas after introductory a) clauses, b) phrases, or c) words that come before the main clause.

3. Use a pair of commas in the middle of a sentence to set off clauses, phrases, and words that are not essential to the meaning of the sentence. Use one comma before to indicate the beginning of the pause and one at the end to indicate the end of the pause.

4. Do not use commas to set off essential elements of the sentence, such as clauses beginning with that (relative clauses). That clauses after nouns are always essential. That clauses following a verb expressing mental action are always essential.

5. Use commas to separate three or more words, phrases, or clauses written in a series.

6. Use commas to separate two or more coordinate adjectives that describe the same noun. Be sure never to add an extra comma between the final adjective and the noun itself or to use commas with non-coordinate adjectives.

7. Use a comma near the end of a sentence to separate contrasted coordinate elements or to indicate a distinct pause or shift.

8. Use commas to set off phrases at the end of the sentence that refer back to the beginning or middle of the sentence. Such phrases are free modifiers that can be placed anywhere in the sentence without causing confusion.

9. Use commas to set off all geographical names, items in dates (except the month and day), addresses (except the street number and name), and titles in names.

10. Use a comma to shift between the main discourse and a quotation.

11. Use commas wherever necessary to prevent possible confusion or misreading.

~Teacher Megan~

My favorite hobby is watching baseball game.

>>> Correct.

Baseball is the most interesting and popular sport in Korea.

>>> Correct

Last year I watched baseball game several times with my best friend who is good at playing baseball as either pitcher and hitter.

>>> Last year, I watched baseball games several times with my best friend who is good at playing baseball as either pitcher and hitter.

Espacially knowing about records and rules is very important for watching Baseball, he tells me as a expert whenever I have a question.

>>> Knowing about records and rules is very important when watching Baseball, he tells me that as an expert whenever I ask a question.

It\'s more fun to watch with him.

>>> Correct.

My favorite team, LG twins, which is placed in Seoul, got a 4th grade last season.

>>> My favorite team is the LG twins, which is based in Seoul, they got the 4th place last season.

Almost all specialist said that LG twins would fail to achive within 4th grade before the last eason started.

>>> Almost all specialist said that the LG twins would fail to grab the 4th place before the last season started.

But younger athletes in LG did a great job even more than expected, so I could watch them on Postseason.

>>> But the younger athletes in LG did a great job even more than what is expected, so I could watch them on Postseason.

Finally, they lost a game against 2rd grade team at the postseason. but they did the best effort they could.

>>> Correct.

I\'m looking forward to start new season at 3/31.

>>> I\'m looking forward to start the new season at 3/31.