My favorite holiday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Laura! I really appreciate that you always make your homework. This way, you can also practice your English writing skill. This can also help you enhance your vocabulary. I think your favorite holidays are interesting. I would like to know more about that during our class. Please see some corrections I have made in your sentences. Thank you very much! Have a nice day!
First, my favorite holiday is chjuseok because long holiday and weather is neither hot nor cold.
>>> My favorite holiday is, first, Chuseok because it is a long holiday and the weather is neither hot nor cold.
Second, my favorite holiday is New Year\'s Day because can start afresh
>>> My second favorite holiday is New year\'s day because I can start a fresh/new beginning.
third, my favorite holiday is children\'s Day althoughㄷeven on children i like this day
>>> My third favorite holiday is Children\'s day, although I am not a child anymore, I still like this day.
_TEACHER MICHELLE_
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.