My favorite is traditional books:)
학생이 쓴 원문
I have read both e-books and traditional books.
I think they have own strengths. e-book is very light.
If I want read everywhere I can read it.
Because e- book service usually using phone.
But in my case my eyes hurts a little.
And traditional books, there is a sentiment that only traditional books give.
My favorite is traditional books.:)
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann!
I have read both e-books and traditional books.
>> CORRECT
I think they have own strengths.
>> I think they have their own strengths.
e-book is very light.
>> E-book books are very light.
If I want read everywhere I can read it.
>> I can read them everywhere that I want.
Because e- book service usually using phone.
>> It\'s because e-book services are usually on our phone.
But in my case my eyes hurts a little.
>> But in my case, my eyes hurt a little.
And traditional books, there is a sentiment that only traditional books give.
>> Traditional books on the other hand has a sentiment that it only has.
My favorite is traditional books.
>> CORRECT
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