My favorite junk food is Pasta!

2021-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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My favorite junk food is pasta. I like junk food in general, so I tried the Ideal World Cup, and as a result, pasta came out. To be honest, I love pasta. Black noodle, of course, belongs to the fattening side, and it bounces well and gets on your mouth well. However, since the amount of pasta comes out a little, I can control the amount and I think the taste is more delicious than black noodle. There are many types of pasta, including cream spaghetti, tomato spaghetti, rosé spaghetti, and bongole spaghetti. Of these, tomato spaghetti is my favorite. Ah! My tip is to buy real tomatoes and mash them and make them yourself rather than the prepared tomato sauce.

강사 첨삭

Hello Maria!

Pasta can be one of the nutritious junk foods we can have sometimes. I love pasta as well specially pesto pasta because it is easy to prepare and it smells so good. Well, you are right. Real tomatoes give the pasta a rich and subtle sour taste along with some seasoning from the cheese and creamlike texture from the noodle.

Most importantly, eat moderately and enjoy!

See you in class with our new book tomorrow.

-T. Donna =)  

My favorite junk food is pasta. 
>> Correct!

I like junk food in general, so I tried the Ideal World Cup, and as a result, pasta came out. 
>> Correct!

To be honest, I love pasta. 
>> Correct!

Black noodle, of course, belongs to the fattening side, and it bounces well and gets on your mouth well. 
>> Correct!

However, since the amount of pasta comes out a little, I can control the amount and I think the taste is more delicious than black noodle. 
>> Correct!

There are many types of pasta, including cream spaghetti, tomato spaghetti, rose; spaghetti, and bongole spaghetti. 
>> Correct!

Of these, tomato spaghetti is my favorite. 
>> Correct!

Ah! My tip is to buy real tomatoes and mash them and make them yourself rather than the prepared tomato sauce.
>> Correct!

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