My favorite local trip
학생이 쓴 원문
I like the trip to Jeju Island most among local attractions. In the Island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain,Hanlasan. I always stay in the accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful sea view and swimming at the beach. And I like seafood there. The fresh sushi in local market of Dong Moon is the best. In the Island, I can experience various walking trails, named Olle Gil.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
I can already imagine Jeju Island based on your answer. I have watched several dramas filmed there, and I can say that the view is really enticing. It must be so much fun to enjoy the food, scenery, and activities in that place. I really hope to visit one day!
- T. Caitlyn
I like the trip to Jeju Island most among local attractions.
>> I like trips to Jeju Island the most among local attractions.
In the Island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain,Hanlasan.
>> On the island, I can climb and enjoy the highest mountain, Hallasan.
I always stay in the accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful sea view and swimming at the beach.
>> I always stay in accommodation near the sea, enjoying the beautiful view and swimming at the beach.
And I like seafood there.
>> CORRECT
The fresh sushi in local market of Dong Moon is the best.
>> The fresh sushi in the local market of Dongmun is the best.
In the Island, I can experience various walking trails, named Olle Gil.
>> On the island, I can experience various walking trails called Olle Gil.
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